Sayali, My comments on your 5th feb uploads are as below- 1-Firstly Instead you need to wrap the sides of the thermocole with cork/ grey board to suggest a wall there instead of seeing the edge of the thermocouple and that too in white. I think the sense of it being earth bound and heavy is not coming thru. 2- secondly I think each of the four fingers has become too similar too each other. There doesn't seem to a lot of variety between each finger. I think you need variations on a dominant theme. Currently at least in the images they seem too similar
3. I also don't understand the bridge/ramp like piece on the extreme lhs. 4. Please draw some sections also simultaneously to understand the change of conditions 5. I think you also need to start thinking about the relationship of the plaza created at the waterside with the upper levels and the inside of the courts. 6. Start at least trying to have your roof element in different ways
31st jan 2012, tuesday
31st jan 2012, tuesday
Sayali,
ReplyDeleteMy comments on your 5th feb uploads are as below-
1-Firstly Instead you need to wrap the sides of the thermocole with cork/ grey board to suggest a wall there instead of seeing the edge of the thermocouple and that too in white. I think the sense of it being earth bound and heavy is not coming thru.
2- secondly I think each of the four fingers has become too similar too each other. There doesn't seem to a lot of variety between each finger. I think you need variations on a dominant theme. Currently at least in the images they seem too similar
3. I also don't understand the bridge/ramp like piece on the extreme lhs.
ReplyDelete4. Please draw some sections also simultaneously to understand the change of conditions
5. I think you also need to start thinking about the relationship of the plaza created at the waterside with the upper levels and the inside of the courts.
6. Start at least trying to have your roof element in different ways